Alpha Reading

Early Developmental Feedback to Help Shape Your Story

  • An Alpha reader, or first reader, plays a crucial role in the early development stages of a manuscript. By offering initial feedback, I help you refine your work before it moves on to professional editing.

What I Offer

  • Early Feedback: Receive detailed insights into your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses, including plot structure, character development, pacing, and overall narrative coherence.

  • Reader Perspective: I approach your manuscript as a potential reader, identifying areas for improvement and highlighting elements that will engage your target audience.

  • Early Editing Notes: While not a formal editing service, I’ll note any grammatical or stylistic issues that impact the polish of your manuscript, adding value at this early stage.

Who It’s For

  • Authors in the early drafting stages who need developmental guidance and foundational feedback to strengthen their story’s structure and appeal.

Pricing

  • Based Rate: $26/10k words ($0.0026/word), rounded down to the nearest 100 words.

  • Rush Fee: +25% for a one-week turnaround and single-chapter readings (rush orders are not rounded down).

  • "If you're seeking an outstanding social media manager and alpha reader, Jess is the person to turn to. As an alpha reader, Jess provides invaluable feedback that is both insightful and constructive, significantly enhancing my stories. She is always an eager sounding board for plot ideas and story development. As a self-published author, I wholeheartedly recommend her services.”
    - Lana Sky, Dark Romance & Paranormal Author

  • “Working with Jess was a true delight! She offers thoughtful suggestions and constructive criticism while being kind, encouraging and supportive. She’s an amazing person and I couldn’t recommend her services enough!”
    - Kanitha P.,     Sports Romance Author

  • "Jess was exceptionally thorough with her alpha reading services. She provided the valuable feedback I had been looking for and helped improve my manuscript overall. I highly recommend her services for those seeking an alpha/beta reader. Jess was clear, concise, and highly professional. Get ready to transform your novel with her insightful feedback."
    - Jewels Hussein,     Fantasy Author

  • “Jessica was an absolute delight to work with. She's very attentive, answers any questions I may have, and her work ethic is phenomenal! I will most definitely continue to work with Jessica for more author services in the future.”
    - Amber Bunch, Dark Romance Author